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THE PERSONAL STATEMENT

 

The following is a sample of a personal statement written by a CCSF student who won a CCSF scholarship. When reading these samples, bear in mind that your personal statement should reflect your own background, education and career goals and special circumstances. It is not necessary or desirable to duplicate the tone or style of any of the samples presented here.

Personal Statement Sample #4

I am a Mexican American who was born and raised in San Francisco. This is my second year attending City College of San Francisco. My educational goal is to obtain a Masters Degree in Biology, and eventually pursuing my doctorate. I plan on getting my Associates degree at City College then transferring to the University of California Berkeley for my undergraduate studies and perhaps my graduate studies. My life time goal is to improve myself and the standard of living for my child through higher education. My career goal is to teach biology at a community college level, and ultimately teach at a university. Three years ago, I could not even see myself pursuing any goals that I had set for myself. I got pregnant at eighteen, and decided to drop out of college so I could work full-time as a co-manager at Contempo Casuals. Needless to say, my parents were not happy. They had worked so hard to teach me important values.

My parents did not realize all the important values I had learned from them. Seeing my parents struggle to support me, my older sister, and younger brother has helped me to learn some valuable rules to live by. first, that you must work hard to achieve your goals. Second, that you must never ever give up working for your goals. Third, that anything is possible if you try hard enough. I apply those rules to my life even more so now that I am a single mother of one terrific boy. He is the very reason why I am so driven, and determined to make a better life for myself. His father is, unfortunately, uncooperative and does not support his son by any financial means.

Being a single mother is not easy. Sometimes I don't know how I will do it to raise a fine young man. I will do anything to ensure him a good and stable future. When he was six months old I realized the only way to ensure his future was through higher education for myself. Knowing that was the key factor to happiness I enrolled at City College the summer of 1996.

City College of San Francisco has helped me to realize even higher goals than I could ever have imagined for myself. I had always loved the sciences, but taking a biology class at the Summerbridge program emphasized that. In fact, the Summerbridge program that was run through Univeristy High School in San Francsico allowed me to take a high school Biology class when I was only in the sixth grade. This class showed me the fundamentals of Biology, and I enjoyed the class immensely. By the time high school came around I already knew that I wanted to take classes in Biology. I was very lucky to enroll in a class that was funded by San Francsico State University for a Biotechnology Recombinant DNA experiment. Because of the level of experimentation involved in this class, I learned so many lab techniques, and had the chance to work with state of the art equipment. At this point I decided that teaching Biology at a community college or university level would be the best job for me.

Through my love for science I know I can make a difference in the lives of my fellow Latinos. I want them to see science as a wonderful field of exploration. In America, Latinos are very under-represented in science. I want to change that, but I do realize that I must take it one step at a time. currently, I am taking twelve units. I have completed thirty-four units with a cumulative GPA of 3.57. I am also on the City College Speech and Debate Team where I am developing my communication skills while practicing my public speaking skills, which are essential to my career. I was also invited to be a part of the National Institute for Health for Minorities in Science where I get to interact with other minorities experiencing the same challenges. Last but not least, I was just accepted as a member of the Alpha Gamma Sigma Honor Society.

Although my parents are helping me, my financial situation is not good. I do not receive any child support or welfare from the government. My parents are left with the bulk of expenses that my son incurs. I work as a temporary administrative assistant only when I can find a qualified, yet decently priced babysitter. Unfortunatley, good childcare is expensive, and eight dollars an hour is not enough to pay for baby-sitting and living expenses. I ahve even had to stop working because of a lack of higher quality, affordable childcare. Luckily, my parents try and help my son the best they can.

I hope one day to pay my parents back for helping me out when I needed it the most. I also plan to help my community be recruiting other Latinos into college. I feel this is the only way we can truly advance ourselves and be heard. We must prove that we too are a strong, powerful, and intelligent people. I plan to help my fellow Hispanics by helping local organizations that deal with the prevention of drugs, alcohol, and gangs. I also hope to enroll at UC Berkeley where I can be apart of their Latino Studies program, as well as the Latino organizations and clubs that support the advancement of all Hispanics. Most of all, as a single mother, I plan to succeed, advance, and survive with a good education.

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