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THE PERSONAL STATEMENT

The following is a sample of a personal statement written by a CCSF student who won a CCSF scholarship. When reading these samples, bear in mind that your personal statement should reflect your own background, education and career goals and special circumstances. It is not necessary or desirable to duplicate the tone or style of any of the samples presented here.

Personal Statement Sample #3

Search for Enlightenment: A Personal Statement

So, I've decided to become a lawyer. After twenty years of preservation, history, activism and scholarship, it's what's left to do. So begins a six-year expedition. First, let's see how we arrived at this place; where we've been, where we're going, and, perhaps, What do we hope to find there?

Preservation runs in my family. When my grandfather, a hillbilly from the Virginia mountains, returned from W.W.I., he settled in Arlington County, near Washington, DC, and started a tree-care business. Forman and Biller Tree Expert Company, now more than 75 years old, would soon become the company of choice for Washington's millionaires. They would entrust to my grandfather, and then my father, their precious oaks, maples and other aged shade trees, even through the Great Depression. In time, the "ladies" at Mount Vernon, George Washington's homestead, would recruit my grandfather to help restore the mansion and grounds of that historic plantation. In the next generation, Jacqueline Kennedy would bring Forman and Biller to the White House to restore that historic landscaping on Pennsylvania Avenue. What began with two-man saws and teams of horses would be finished by high-tech chainsaws, hydraulic cranes, and even more modern technologies. But in 1959, when I was born, preservation had become a family legacy, one which I would inherit. Little did I know how complex and challenging the pursuit would become as times changed and preservation became not just an aspiration, a personal struggle, but a career.

First came reading. Boy, did I read. Biographies, fiction, non-fiction; I ripped through my elementary school library, moving on to the public library by age 10, and tearing through those stacks, too. By age 15, the stacks of George Washington University became my home-away-from-home. There was, of course, all the boy-stuff: camping, Eagle Scout, sailing at the beach house my family owned in the 1970s. I built a racing boat when I was 16, with plans from Popular Science. Having a fully-equipped workshop was a big advantage. I could build almost anything. When I got older, I realized the value of a full workshop.

When I reached high school, there was trouble at home. My parents separated. I went off to college in Richmond, Virginia, and did as well as one might expect: terribly. I had been accepted at Cornell University, but with the divorce and lawyers and settlement financing, Cornell did not happen. I did manage to hook up with a rock n' roll band, though. It didn't help much with college, but ina few short years the technical skills I learned would help me land a job at the venerable Smithsonian Institution. You never know where things will take you.

From 1981 to 1987, I served the Smithsonian as an audio-visual specialist. I worked hundreds and hundreds of shows, met luminaries such as the artist Christo, VIP's such as Jimmy Carter and George Schultz, and spent many an early morning listening in on top-secret Wilson Center breakfasts with the Trilateral Commission, as they laid out their plans to usurp Communism. The pay was good; the education was unparalleled. Even at Ivy League institutions, I could never learn such things. But in 1987, after nearly 30 years in the DC area, I heeded the call to "Go West, Young Man." California would become home; San Francisco my new port of call. In California, my history and future would unit.

I wasted no time catching up on California history. Soon after arriving, I began a local history library, which now contains 5,000 books and some 25,000 periodicals; it will all go to U.C. Berkeley's esteemed Bancroft Library, soon. I became involved in local preservation efforts. A friend and I began archiving 400,000 historic SF blueprints at U.C. Berkeley, a project still in its infancy. By 1991, I was publishing books and newsletters and tackling one preservation/education effort after another. And in 1994, upon discovering that the deYoung Museum had given away a 12th Century monastery received from William Randolph Hearst in 1941, an illegal gift to 27 aging monks 200 miles north of the city, my local career in activism began. Although we have not yet returned the two-million pounds of hand-carved limestone home, we did manage to see published a national article on the controversy in a major New York-based publication, Metropolis Magazine. And before that event had transpired, another major controversy arose. The ongoing desecration of the San Francisco Public Library was discovered.

Books are being written about the "San Francisco Public Library Revolt." Thanks to the work of myself and others, the plight at SFPL reached millions of Americans via newspapers, television and magazine accounts. Along with my colleagues, we created, and pushed ahead, the most comprehensive library media campaign in American history. Corporate profieteers were running amuck in that noble institution. Through our massive political/media efforts, the henchmen were repelled. Today, thanks to our work, a million books and periodicals have been saved from destruction and the library is being slowly restored. If you'd asked me five years ago if I could predict this, I would have questioned your sanity. After all, nobody would trash a great library with SFPL, now would they?

So here I am. I learned from the SFPL and monastery projects that political and media skills are not enough. One needs the law. So, with every other tool in my toolbox, these last assets, a law degree and bar certificate, would make my workshop complete. So I returned to City College, to begin that expedition. As a matter of fact, I may attend Cornell after all. But not as an undergrad; as a law student, this time. Life has a way of taking us backwards to the future.

In the classic Hollywood film, Raiders of the Lost Ark, Indiana Jones' greatest discovery, the Ark of the Covenant, is unearthed and as suddenly returned to the sacred tomb of history. The modern-day buccaneer turns to his father, Indiana Jones, Sr., and asks incredulously, with everything seemingly lost, "What was it all for?" The wizened senior laughs, and beaming, answers: Enlightenment!

That is, after all, what we seek through our work, our education and our worldly aspirations. From City College to Cornell University, the trail of discovery beckons. Nothing can be sure. Enlightenment, after all, is not an end, but a path.

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