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THE PERSONAL STATEMENT

The following is a sample of a personal statement written by a CCSF student who won a CCSF scholarship. When reading these samples, bear in mind that your personal statement should reflect your own background, education and career goals and special circumstances. It is not necessary or desirable to duplicate the tone or style of any of the samples presented here.

Personal Statement Sample #2

Early in my high school years I discovered a personal truth, that I have no limitations other than those I choose to impose upon myself. Everyone brings to the world unique talents, gifts, and abilities, and some of mine include my strong will and my determination to be able to give something back to the communities in which I was raised. My plans are to not only use education as a tool to prepare me for a vocation, but also to help me become a self-sufficient individual who is fully prepared for life.

No one is exempt from turmoil during their lives, and I can honestly say that I am thankful for the adversities and challenges which have crossed my path because they have strengthened my character and brought forth certain virtues I might otherwise never have known. There are various personal issues with which I have struggled and I have no doubt as to where their foundations lie. Because my parents divorced when I was two, I did not grow up with a secure sense of home. I was juggled around between different family members, each taking part in raising me with their own set of standards and values. I had different customs at each home and had to learn how to be "politically correct" according to who I was with. For example, with my father's family, I went to a Catholic church and studied the New Testament and, while with my mother's family, who is Jewish, I attended synagogue, studied the Torah and learned to pray in Hebrew.

One of the greatest challenges I have faced was growing up multi-ethnic in a bilingual and multi-cultural environment. Even though the society in which I live insists on categorizing me into one racial category, I consider myself to be multi-ethnic. My mother's ethnic make-up is French, Polish and Ukranian and my father's is Brazilian, Native American (Fulni-o), and African. Some of the conflicts that I dealt with while growing up concerned issues surrounding physical appearance, self-esteem, and questions such as "where do I fit in?" and "to whom do I belong?" Fortunately, I have since learned that being part of more than one ethnic group is anadvantage, not a detriment, and I am proud to claim and take part in my diverse heritage. Everyone and everything in my past has been my teacher, and I feel that my history has inevitably led me to my major field of study, Ethnic Studies, about which I am immensely passionate. It has been a wonderful rite of passage for me to learn to accept all the parts of myself.

I am currently involved in various community activities and am particularly proud of my involvement with the Shanti Project, a San Francisco based organization dedicated to helping people who are HIV positive. I also devote a great deal of my time to music, a tremendously important part of my life. In addition to performing at local fund raisers, I spend time practicing and recording. I have on occasion found myself challenged to the maximum of my capabilities because of my high academic standards, my volunteer work, my music, and my part-time jobs. But my strong belief that I have no limitations and my will to succeed has kept me going.

One cannot always choose the circumstances one is dealt, but one does have the choice as to how one chooses to deal with them. Some of my goals include developing my spirituality, working with children to help them maintain their sense of self by possibly teaching or counseling, and graduing from university. I would like the opportunity to be able to pass along the information I have learned, that no one person other than oneself can keep one from achieving one's goals and that everyone has the potential to share with the world their unique talents, gifts, and abilities. While one may find motivation in one's hopes for the future, one must not devalue the steps one takes to get there, because it is through one's past joys and hardships that one comes to be who one is in the future. As Ursula le Guin so aptly stated, "I is good to have an end to journey towards, but is the journey that matters in the end."

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