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THE PERSONAL STATEMENT

 

The following is a sample of a personal statement written by a CCSF student who won a CCSF scholarship. When reading these samples, bear in mind that your personal statement should reflect your own background, education and career goals and special circumstances. It is not necessary or desirable to duplicate the tone or style of any of the samples presented here.

Personal Statement Sample #1

I have always dreamed of becoming an artist.
Art is my passion;
Art is my companion;
Art is my soul.

I am surrounded by art work in my home: ceramics, paintings, calligraphy, photography, and graphic designs that I have created with pencil, pen, charcoal, clay, and brushes.

I was just four years old when my mother taught me how to paint. Rather than having me play with dolls and toys, she encouraged me to copy her drawings and to paint my own pictures. Year after year she insisted that I continue to draw. Consequently, I drew thousands of pictures when still a child. I sketched eggs, fruits, vegetables, furniture and gypsum sculptures, even human figures. Other children would beg their parents to take them to places of amusement; I would beg my parents to take me to art museums.

I had a lonely childhood; my parents were often called out of town and could not spend as much time iwth me as they would have liked. My consolation was my art. Even before I could write, I was drawing pictures for my mother and father, indicating that I loved them and missed them, sending them pictures in place of letters. My parents saved these pictures for many years, and recently my father informed me that the love I showed during those trying times was a strong motivation to help my parents survive the catastrophe of Chinese Cultural Revaluation.

When I was in the third grade, my art teacher considered me to be more advanced than many other students and suggested that I design and paint pictures for the school bulletin board, so other students could have the opportunity to view my drawings. Every Friday afternoon, I would stand on a desk and facing that 18-foot-long bulletin board (I was not tall enough to reach the top of the board), sketching, drawing, painting and writing calligraphy. Year by year, I was given the chance to create and share my colorful world with others; it became my greatest pleasure. I now had a goal: to become the best designer the world has ever known.

I continued to design and paint school bulletin boards throughout my middle and high school years, winning many awards for my drawings, Chinese brush paintings and calligraphy. However, my parents did not want me to become an artist. They would rather I become a business person or scientist because in China, art is used for political propaganda; they didn't want me to get involved in Chinese politics. I acceded to their wishes, working for foreign business companies after graduating from high school.

In July of 1993, I immigrated to the United States, and from then until December, 1994, I struggled through the most difficult period of my life, surviving one traumatic experience after another: domestic abuse, hiding from a violent ex-husband, divorce, a serious illness and major surgery. Without question, some of those experiences have strengthened me. In spite of this, nothing could extinguish my dream. Art was the candlelight that illuminated those dark shadowy days. I went to work in a fishing tackle store, using my spare time to visit museums and practice sketching and drawing. My love for art overcome those anxioius and otherwise gloomy times.

Not long time ago, I acquired a part-time position as a professional painter, tooling and painting Disney figures on ceramics. Now I am more certain than ever before that my art is my life. I cannot live without it.

In January of 1995, at the age of 28, after having been out of school for nearly five years, I went to college to pursue a higher education. I studied diligently throughout the week, weekends, and holidays. I took 19 units, so I could complete my General Education requirement in three semesters. With a 3.9 GPA, I achieved my AA degree with the highest honor of City College of San Francisco. During the graduation ceremony, I wept tears of joy.

During the summer of 1996, I used all my savings to take a trip on Amtrak, primarily to visit art museums. I didn't see many of the other sights in the cities I visited by spent nearly all my time at the Boston Fine Arts Museum, the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York City, the National Gallery of Art at the Smithsonian complex in Washington D.C., the Chicago Art Institute and the William Rockhill Nelson Gallery of Art in Kansas City, MO. I also enjoyed the many fine paintings gracing the walls at the White House in Washington when on a special tour. I was absolutely captivated by the collections in these wonderful museums and would often spend the entire day in one building. While visiting the Museum of American History in Washington, D.C., I fortuitously came upon a series of 3-D computer animation and graphic design, playing a a TV set. I was enthralled by this utilization of modern technology in art and stood there watching it over and over again, mesmerized and spellbound.

Because of this and other experiences, I feel an irresistible impulse to challenge myself once more, to acquire knowledge of art with respect to the application of advanced scientific technology. I have decided to use the gifts that God has given me in this challenging field. I wish to attend the University of California because of its prestige and long history of teaching art courses, but perhaps more importantly, I wish to be exposed to the outstanding faculty. Indubitably, their help will be a significant factor in my achieving my educational goal, that of becoming an artist.

With the help of Scholarship funds, I will be able to add more art supplies to aid my daily practice. Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Illustrator and QuarkXpress are the three computer graphic design softwares that I dream to have, however, I am not able to afford. With some help, I wish I can purchase these software and use them on making better brochures and flier designs for the departments of CCSF.

During the vicissitudes of life, my art is always with me. I shall go anywhere art leads me. With it, I am living my life to the fullest, happy and content. Without it, I am nothing.

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